Open Poetry #29 |
Diamonds Never Lose Their Sparkle |
jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Diamonds Never Lose Their Sparkle Falling to dreams I saved a tear, it’s sparkle not lost in a plunge to it’s end; a world of my inner-soul awakened, a fantasy, a view as I would have life be, in a perfect world – but only inside of me. Diamonds never loose their sparkle, nor my heart the rhythm of the love it gives – perfect love, in a perfect world, my inner-soul awakened, by you. I steal the leaves from fall-red trees knowing spring will bring them back, turn each one into a heart, and lay a path for you to walk – to me . . . a fantasy, a world of my inner-soul awakened, a perfect world – where you love me, true only . . . inside of me. w.james beard, jr. (c) october 2003 [This message has been edited by jwesley (10-24-2003 10:44 PM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Inside of us all is the capacity for the perfect fantasy to form and fill the hours of alone with pictures of love. You write them with such splendid color. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I steal the leaves from fall-red trees knowing spring will bring them back, turn each one into a heart, and lay a path for you to walk – to me . . . This was beautiful |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I steal the leaves from fall-red trees" beautiful and it is true...diamonds NEVER lose their sparkle...h |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
a fantasy, a world of my inner-soul awakened, a perfect world James, our fantasies help us to get through the trying times of life. I think they are a good thing. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jwesley, I like it. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such powerful medicine is mixed in the fantasy world...where we give birth to dreams and then live them. All blessings. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this brings a melancholic sigh from me [This message has been edited by passing shadows (10-25-2003 01:42 PM).] |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
knowing spring will bring them back, turn each one into a heart, and lay a path for you to walk – to me Simply beautiful and a wonderful fantasy ~Angie~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ I absotively, posilutely love it !!! 'I steal the leaves from fall-red trees knowing spring will bring them back, turn each one into a heart, and lay a path for you to walk – to me' *SIGH* *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I steal the leaves from fall-red trees knowing spring will bring them back, ***************************************** AHA! so that's where they all went! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssssss) Oh James, this would make a beautiful song, sweet friend, we all have the ability to love in our hearts and your heart is crystaline and incredibly giving! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Awwww, come on Jimmy....bring back the leaves...I have to rake something this year! Very nicely written, you are quite a romantic devil.... you devil! |
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