Open Poetry #29 |
Petals Of Love |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
If I had a petal so soft I would give it to you with ten more, even softer, I would generate a rose, the perfect exquisite vision mirroring in your charm grouping them together to simulate your brilliance in a sunshine warming smile. I would then create a bush, roots so vibrantly nourished, it would never stop blossoming longing for my loving fingers taking care of your infinite needs creating a garden so divine every treasure of nature growing so lavishly in it cuddling in the vision, needing you more and more. D.Lester Young Somewhere in America not on company time 10/26/03 [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (10-26-2003 04:51 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This was so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Truly lovely. Love, Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (10-26-2003 07:22 PM).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
softly beautiful Sadelite |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I've known such feelings. I never thought they could be lost, but I also never expected to find them again in two different directions. Thus my curse is also my blessing, it seems, as it creates these feelings twice in me. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This was the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time, and it makes me think this kind of loving service to one would make them want to give that back the same. Very nice to read. I am saving this one to go back to read over, and over. What a loving experience for "two." Lovely, lovely this was! A kiss for you to share with this lucky one you give more than lip service!!! Love, Terri~ |
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