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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
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Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-10-26 04:18 PM


If I had a petal so soft
I would give it to you
with ten more, even softer,
I would generate a rose,
the perfect exquisite vision
mirroring in your charm
grouping them together
to simulate your brilliance
in a sunshine warming smile.

I would then create a bush,
roots so vibrantly nourished,
it would never stop blossoming
longing for my loving fingers
taking care of your infinite needs
creating a garden so divine
every treasure of nature
growing so lavishly in it
cuddling in the vision,
needing you more and more.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 10/26/03

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (10-26-2003 04:51 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-10-26 04:37 PM


This was so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Joyce Johnson
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since 2001-03-10
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2 posted 2003-10-26 04:45 PM


Truly lovely. Love, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (10-26-2003 07:22 PM).]

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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3 posted 2003-10-26 05:17 PM


softly beautiful
                        Sadelite

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
4 posted 2003-10-26 07:05 PM


I've known such feelings. I never thought they could be lost, but I also never expected to find them again in two different directions. Thus my curse is also my blessing, it seems, as it creates these feelings twice in me.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
5 posted 2003-10-26 08:12 PM


This was the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time, and it makes me think this kind of loving service to one would make them want to give that back the same. Very nice to read. I am saving this one to go back to read over, and over. What a loving experience for "two." Lovely, lovely this was! A kiss for you to share with this lucky one you give more than lip service!!!
Love,
Terri~

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