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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-10-24 10:07 AM





An orange orb slowly sets
veiling me in thoughts of you
~stirring of memories begin...again~

Gazing into evening skies
in light of silver moon
shooting stars   slip by
~I plead for a wish to come true~

Silhouettes begin to dance
   my soul aches from feel      of bittersweet
clouds shroud    images
    slowly  fading........
~I still hear your whispers on the breeze~

A yearning, a burning inside
just one    last dance
to make a dream come true.....
~longings for yesterday~

I linger in magical moments
~time mystically touches my soul~

       Still of night surrounds me
       as my heart remembers...


We've got to lend a helping hand and learn to live
with our brother, we've got to
change this to a better land
and live in peace with one another..Head East.



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-24-2003 06:51 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-24 10:09 AM


Dear Donna, you certainly did not lose your poetic stride while you were convalescing!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2003-10-24 10:20 AM


Donna...Another one of those sad but beautiful memories from your mind. Enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (10-24-2003 10:21 AM).]

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-10-24 10:35 AM


Donna, this was truly a bittersweet moment, one of which was kind of you to share with us.  Thank you
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2003-10-24 10:44 AM



I wish I
had written this...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-10-24 11:11 AM


This touches the very soul...
lovely Donna...yet so sad.
Heart Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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