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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-10-23 06:41 PM


Kiss Me Into Reality

As she lay next
to me, she started
to kiss me passionately.
And I said, "Take me
into reality, that place
where fantasy ends.
Kiss me into reality.
Again and again
and again."

JamesLee
October23
2003

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-10-23 06:48 PM



Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2003-10-23 07:05 PM


James...It looks like Enchantress has those lips working overtime.
Enjoyed the tenderness in this piece...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

jwesley
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3 posted 2003-10-23 07:06 PM


Seems to me fantasy and reality blended well here James...who's to say where the one began and the other ended...

That we all might meld them so well...

jwesley

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-10-23 09:18 PM


ah, reality..sweet reality
LeeJ
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5 posted 2003-10-24 07:33 AM


how lovely
Mary Ann
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6 posted 2003-10-24 10:16 AM


...very sweet
EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2003-10-24 11:37 AM


Mind if I show this one to the wife? She can kiss me into reality NOW! LOL!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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