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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-10-22 03:16 PM



Come Of Light ... Into The Night
~*Marge Tindal*~

Cascading with light
Sun rays on curtain of morn
Drawn on rising day~

Shadows of clouds drift
Lazily across yon' sun
Kissing day with cool~

Wind seeps into day
Billows us to tomorrow
Dismissing the glow~

Night falls - I catch it
Moon glows on window of night
Casting own shadow~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-22 03:17 PM



You're on a roll now!

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2 posted 2003-10-22 03:18 PM


Beautiful Margie girl!!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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3 posted 2003-10-22 03:21 PM


Lovely!
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4 posted 2003-10-22 03:48 PM


Lovely images you've captured! *S*
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5 posted 2003-10-22 05:24 PM


This is so pretty Marge.
Luv ya,
Betty

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6 posted 2003-10-22 05:25 PM


very nice
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7 posted 2003-10-23 05:55 PM


Dear Marge:  A day in review and lovely too!

Love
Betty Lou

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8 posted 2003-10-23 07:05 PM


and what a day it was!
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9 posted 2003-10-24 09:14 AM


How beautiful you write
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10 posted 2003-10-24 09:53 AM


A beautiful poem Marge.
As I fly about PIP I see your window is open.
As I fly low I smell the rich aroma a Chocolate seeping out of that curtained window. I comin' to visit.
The Chocolate Monster is flyin' in PIP.

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11 posted 2003-10-24 10:01 AM


Night falls- and you catch it! That opens up so many possibilities to me! You're inspiring.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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12 posted 2003-10-24 10:07 AM


Thank you for the splendid haikuic day!

~ May all your days and nights be so!


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13 posted 2003-10-24 10:10 AM



Thank you EVERYONE~
Actually to 'see' this stringing of little Haiku/Senryu's through the 'eyes' of such lovely comments, has endeared it to my heart~

And - Nan (of the Pilgrim variety)
To even think that I'd 'inspire' someone of your talent is a *gifted smile*~
Thank you~
*Huglets* ALL~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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14 posted 2003-10-24 10:24 AM


Marge...Simply beautiful. I could picture you sitting on a porch swing taking it all in.Thanks so much for this gift...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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15 posted 2003-10-24 10:33 AM


wondrous beauty!
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