Open Poetry #29 |
Come Of Light ... Into The Night |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Come Of Light ... Into The Night ~*Marge Tindal*~ Cascading with light Sun rays on curtain of morn Drawn on rising day~ Shadows of clouds drift Lazily across yon' sun Kissing day with cool~ Wind seeps into day Billows us to tomorrow Dismissing the glow~ Night falls - I catch it Moon glows on window of night Casting own shadow~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're on a roll now! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Margie girl!! ~Smiles & Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovely images you've captured! *S* |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is so pretty Marge. Luv ya, Betty |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A day in review and lovely too! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and what a day it was! |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
How beautiful you write |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
A beautiful poem Marge. As I fly about PIP I see your window is open. As I fly low I smell the rich aroma a Chocolate seeping out of that curtained window. I comin' to visit. The Chocolate Monster is flyin' in PIP. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Night falls- and you catch it! That opens up so many possibilities to me! You're inspiring. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for the splendid haikuic day! ~ May all your days and nights be so! Earthy One |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you EVERYONE~ Actually to 'see' this stringing of little Haiku/Senryu's through the 'eyes' of such lovely comments, has endeared it to my heart~ And - Nan (of the Pilgrim variety) To even think that I'd 'inspire' someone of your talent is a *gifted smile*~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ALL~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Simply beautiful. I could picture you sitting on a porch swing taking it all in.Thanks so much for this gift...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wondrous beauty! |
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