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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-24 02:18 AM



Do you see beyond the ruby,
beyond the tears of blood?

Do you hear the cries of agony,
from the heaven's above?

Those are
souls
being judged.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-24 02:37 AM


for they deserve to sufer
laying their faith
upon the line of lust...

beautiful read, gives me the creeps though

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-10-24 07:02 AM


yes, spooky
and good

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-10-24 07:42 AM


well written....
Ericc
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4 posted 2003-10-24 12:09 PM


Wow...!!!!!

Eric

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-10-24 12:14 PM


Hi Meg!

I just love everything that comes out of your mind and pen.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-10-24 04:40 PM


I can't hear a friggin thing the neighbours playing Busta again..i don't get it what's the point of cranking the bass that high unless your sitting on the speakers..tingly
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7 posted 2003-10-24 04:42 PM


Double Wow!  Intense...
                      Sadelite

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8 posted 2003-10-31 02:52 PM


Or worse yet, judging themselves....

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