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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-23 08:52 AM


Strands of meaning connecting

I see the music

Leaning to interpret

Tone changes and obsessions

Bright eyes of night tide

I won’t lose the lesson

I can’t….

Millennium achieves

Responsibility

With a stroke of luck

Our love for each other surpasses needs

Call me superstitious

Yet all brings me dreams

Lying down in a tomb ritualistic

There by our sea, there attainable states

embraceing the nightengale

elevation of soul...profoundly


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-10-23 08:58 AM


ah...... now this...this I really like.

well done!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-10-23 09:00 AM


LeeJ
Happy thoughts make for happy days.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-10-23 09:08 AM


YES!!  I love this!!
Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-10-23 03:44 PM


a short one!

yes!

I like this!

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