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Open Poetry #29
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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-10-23 08:50 AM


I drift into the fool's paradise
Taken afar to places where fantasy breathes.

Eyes unused in reality open
Stepping into fairy stories of the mind
where memories replay
Drawing me back to days of happiness missed
Changing the unalterable to what could have been.
© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-10-23 09:19 AM

Lee..I commented on this over in CA..and won't repeat all I said there here..I'll just say I like the theme and the idea...
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-10-23 03:43 PM

sometimes it's all you've got

*sigh*
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