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Holding On
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Holding On |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Tenuously populated citation waiting Meekly behind you shaking hands I am a factor of misconception More precise, by clarity imprinted in three names Seated within….a Commodity distributed, predestined espousal Richness summing up all things opposing all things unequal Mystery of such, power of the air Establishing promises, artistic samples, live leader Flesh and maid were children Nature’s resource suitably with temporal forms Attributed characters, immutable or changeless Fantasia’s Greensleeves for harp and flutes alike Hypothesis of someone other then myself Inside screaming to get out screaming to get out So to the composition I am a slave Incorporation with this head of grace Pouting and stubborn inherently To the militia of darkness Locals from an upsurge in cannons Setting out to rid an army of skeletons Giving good reason to stammer Gagging ghouls, turning to hit and miss Editing self mockery, receive their notices And extensive coverage of updated news Binding special offers, ridding this town of blues Label me my ticket, bringing energy to mind Believing helps the environment Where water flows over hands Helping to preserve the planet So I clean my bathroom twenty or so times Day by day…updating reminders Revealing maintaining words Creating cogent primers Studying sutras in books preserved I am the transgressor, the soldier, the thief Cleaning out the passages of attentive activities Holding on...holding on |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ, And you will until the end. A very insightful and descriptive write.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Keep on keepin' on, Lee..  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you don't get read enough...maybe it's the length or maybe its the use of vocabulary in such ways...one really has to sit down and think in silence when they read you to be able to grasp it all... which is a good thing |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Excellent writing, as always, Lee. You have an enormous amount of talent... with many heart feelings...a great combination!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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