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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-10-23 07:51 AM

Horses and Daisies

He rides a horse of weary trot
A dappled gray of was and not
That stops along the muck of seem
To pluck at daisies of his dream

A reprobate as spirits go
A wit of age and melted snow
A dandelion of lurid wine
A salt that’s left of dried up brine

Laughable to young and spry
He cannot tell the truth from lie
He nibbles at the daisies fair
With humor, wit and not a care

Tongue to busy to bulge the cheek
And fantasy his nose does leak
He smiles and guile’s a style of rile
Chantilly’s lace a rose of wile.

He means no harm he says in force
This preen around, this risqué course

Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-10-23 08:00 AM

I adore this Sey! Good morning hugs hon!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-10-23 08:10 AM

Good Morning Sy, positively wondrous write
Thank you, and Sy, many thanks to you for your kind comments on my poems. Much appreciate.

Nan

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3 posted 2003-10-23 08:14 AM

Anything's possible upon that steed...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-10-23 08:29 AM

Gentle Spirit
Thank you dear you are a gem.

LeeJ,
Those that don't read it are missing out.
Top of the morning to ya.

Nan,
And you are a sweety pie.

PS from an old horse, LOL.

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2003-10-23 08:35 AM

A dandelion of lurid wine
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That line is cooler than even COOL knows

And after our day under the arch you already know I'm loving the dapple grays of your poetic ways.

*ww*

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-23 08:37 AM

Tongue to busy to bulge the cheek

~*~

Enjoying this line, and its innuendo...
Well done, Sy!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-23 08:44 AM

Wonderful morning read once again dear Sy!
I always love waking up to you and your amazing words in rhyme.
Have time for tea?...I'll pour.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

scorpio
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right...there

8 posted 2003-10-23 08:47 AM

Awesome as always Sy!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2003-10-23 08:51 AM

JM,
You are my Tinkerbell nuff said.
And Randy says the brie is brim
And would you give a thought to him.
LOL WWRS

Sunshine,
Bought some "innuendos: at the flee market
thought I'd use some. LOL

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-23 08:55 AM

scorpio
So glad you enjoyed,

Nancy,
You pour I'll drink.

Lady Of Light
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11 posted 2003-10-23 10:14 AM

What a delightful poem to start my day.
Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-10-23 10:35 AM

Thank you my Lady Of Light.

vandana

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13 posted 2003-10-23 10:56 AM

enjoyed this read

Sunshine

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14 posted 2003-10-23 11:02 AM

ROFL at "flee"...
You sweetie pie!

Earth Angel
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15 posted 2003-10-23 11:04 AM

....

There, done!

Good morning, my absolute favourite sonneteer in this galaxy!

I love your poetry--and you!

Sweet angel hugs and kisses,
EA

P.S. I have some divine daisies for you! lol

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-10-23 11:35 AM

vandana
Thank you my dear.

Sunshine
You always make my day.

Earth Angel
I'll have some with Nancy's tea. LOL
You are a love.

passing shadows
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17 posted 2003-10-23 01:41 PM

gosh Seymour, you have such a way with words

I liked this one a lot

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-10-23 03:10 PM

passing,
That please me no end.

garysgirl

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19 posted 2003-10-23 07:36 PM

Laughable to young and spry
He cannot tell the truth from lie
He nibbles at the daisies fair
With humor, wit and not a care

I know somebody like this. LOL
Well, the human doesn't eat the daisies...I don't guess. ahahahahaha.

Another one to make us think, dear Seymour.
I miss you when I'm not here to read you.

Hugs to you, my friend

Ethel

Martie

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20 posted 2003-10-23 07:55 PM

Sy...Many start their day with tea and your poetry, today I'm late, so instead of coffee...would you and that rascal horse like to join me for a beer?

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2003-10-23 09:15 PM

garysgirl
And I miss you when I don't find a reply.

Martie,
The pleasure would be all mine.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

22 posted 2003-10-27 11:42 PM

And me? I'm VERY late.

How bout a whiskey? (I hear it's made from horse food)

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2003-10-28 07:12 AM

wranx
It is and my pleasure.

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