Open Poetry #29 |
Barn Owl. |
Jack- In- The- Green Junior Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 31The green woodlands. |
Gliding on silent wings, twisting,turning,diving, the silver, ghost like bird flies. Golden grassland, waves of slender stems sway in the breeze, hunting bird flies low, through the evening skies. Unwary voles and mice, caught by dagger like talons, slung low beneath a body of purest white. Pouncing silent, with agile eye,mind and wings, death is inevitable. Arriving ontop the rodent, out of it's sight. Borne away for chicks, or swallowed whole on nearby favourite perch. Wildest creature of the air, and beautiful bird, i love you. In darkest, coldest winter, my thoughts are of you. Have you been able to feed today? Nights of frost,fields of silver, skies of snowy blue. Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow. |
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ShakespearesSister Junior Member
since 2003-10-14
Posts 24 |
You must have read my mind barn owls are my favorite birds as well. They are so beautiful and graceful, I liked the flow and beauty inside this piece. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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Jack- In- The- Green Junior Member
since 2003-09-11
Posts 31The green woodlands. |
Very happy to know that you liked my poem....will look out for some of your poems to reply to..... Jack. Have you seen jack-in -the green he taps his cain on the ground and signals the snowdrops it's time to grow. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This owl could not resist the title...happy flying |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice to read. I love birds, and the outdoors...these things I adore, and I am fascinated by them. Thanks so much for sharing this. I love these beautiful creatures. Love, Terri~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jack, Reading your poetry is like being inside a bird santuary.Sometimes through your poetry you allow me to see through their eyes, feel through their feelings. I have a very fond appreciation for all birds, cardinals, bluejays, hummingbirds, goldfinches, robins, etc. ~ARH |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Have you ever heard the sound of an owl's wing on the wind? You barely know they are there. Enjoyed, very much! |
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