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Open Poetry #29

naturally ungraceful

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-27 10:48 PM

the land broken by empty voices,
the sounds and their confusions,
the fallow,
the ramble,
the crying abnormality of illusions,
the time and its children uncreated…

fear cuddled in synthetic faith
blown beyond its wildest dreams.

dragged under-where
the body needs no soul,
for worms to feast on waste

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-10-27 11:17 PM

definitely a desolate landscape painted here
which could be seen in a larger context of verse that would show other moods, nice use of imagery and diction

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-27-2003 11:18 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-10-28 01:24 AM

fear cuddled in synthetic faith
blown beyond its wildest dreams

well you know i l@ved this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-28 05:13 AM

I'm becoming a fan

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2003-10-28 07:23 AM

Deep~!~ Theres No Other Word That Can Describe Your Poem

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

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