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Morning sky (Peer Gynt Suite No. 1)
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Morning sky (Peer Gynt Suite No. 1) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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scent of something different ripple heart of water sings playing chimes on hallowed ground listening OH listening to the hollows of sacred everything is fluid new fingers spread across my spine fanning me behind the blush I am now forever changed by just the promise of your touch. Feel I am the palm in sway split leaf showing shades of sky I never knew I hid away until I felt this shine of sun... Miracles of pink on gray. Let me finger feed you here crumbs upon the altar cloth. Miracle of warming me. Aching fingers wanderlust down the keyboard high and sweet leave me (if you must) leave me in reach of just another day. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-21-2003 03:33 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Feel I am the palm in sway split leaf showing shades of sky I never knew I hid away until I felt this shine of sun..." hmmm..this was so warm. Susan |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed the write n read,,, |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"...forever changed by just the promise of your touch..." Nicely said, serene one...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ah...I'll disagree a bit... they are never just another day... they are always a brand new day... and I greet each one! Congrats on your 16,000th post, Serenity! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Congrats on 16,000 posts! --and on yet another very fine write!   You have quite a following!--and there are good reasons for that!  ~ You fly with the best of them! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, What did you have for breakfast this morning?  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Karen . . . I never knew I hid away until I felt this shine of sun... no, me neither . . . it is lovely, isnt it? What a beautiful write xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Ser.. and as I read this "Morning" from Peer Gynt played in my mind.... Much enjoyed this one.. Love ya lady!
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
awww how beautiful penned, enjoyed the read very much, and congrats on 16000 ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oops! Almost forgot! CONGRATULATIONS On 16,000 Posts!  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....WOW.....or is that SOS.....you do sensual so well! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity...You are so lovely, ya know?!  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I never knew I hid away until I felt this shine of sun..." Yes...oh yes...sigh... This...and YOU...beautiful... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Yay! Oh Karen, this is a most heartfelt write, dearest friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON 16,000+ POSTS!!! (big hugggsssssss) Your poetry truly makes each reader "feel" the emotions, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
sighsssss...good ones |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
everything is fluid new fingers spread across my spine fanning me behind the blush I am now forever changed by just the promise of your touch. Dear SereneOne, this is so beautiful...and you know that I so relate to that part. Yep, I certainly do! and  Ethel And....... CONGRATULATIONS on 16,000 post [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-21-2003 04:25 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am now forever changed by just the promise of your touch. Yes... I know this. *S* Beautiful write, serene one... and congratulations on your milestone! *S* |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Touching. I remember morning sun, I just can't conjure up the heat. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Serenity, Congrats on 16,000 posts. This was a beautiful way to mark the occassion. Dawn |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
its been so long you forget the colors and you realize how thick the blanket of cobwebs has covered the eyes everything turns grey so slowly you dont notice till someone rips them down and you squint in unbelieving you are that hand that blessed my eyes |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You got the touch Beautiful darlin' |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
stumbling in with my coffee here... sleepy smiles, hugs and thank you's. |
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