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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
0 posted 2003-09-22 10:07 AM



Yards of Lace

Your words of beauty spilling over into
delicate yards of intricate lace.
Weaving a web of morning dew
and
warm radiant sunrises.
Taking our hearts within your magical pen.
You lead us down colorful country roads,
then take us down
elaborate city highways
that lead us to peaceful ocean shores.
Melting frozen hearts
with heated words of hidden passion
or
freezing us in time
with each and every sweeping stroke
of your talented pen.
Strokes of words
on colored parchment
and with each stroke
life is transformed into vibrant colors
or
with each stroke
a metamorphosis begins changing into
delicate memories of mesmerizing magnitude.
We thank you for your pearls of wisdom
and
your words that spill over into
the intricate and delicate yards of lace.

Love Bon-Bon
© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
1 posted 2003-09-22 10:08 AM

your words that spill over into
the intricate and delicate yards of lace


beautiful penning,,,

                                    

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2003-09-22 10:23 AM

This is truly lovely
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-09-22 11:10 AM


Don't you love being inspired, Bonnie?
I know I do...and you did Sy's inspire
poetic justice!
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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4 posted 2003-09-22 11:16 AM

This is lovely, Bonnie!  
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
5 posted 2003-09-22 11:21 AM

Hello and good good morning!  This was a very pretty poem and a perfect description of the poet...thank you kind lady for this beautiful write.
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
6 posted 2003-09-22 12:53 PM

I'm glad that you were inspired. You both are an inspiration to so many.
Crystal
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2003-09-22 01:03 PM

Bonnie  
A fine piece of poetry, I love it.
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