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Open Poetry #29

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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-22 12:40 PM

waved

brittle taste
wind waste

lying lips
eyes cold
stipple face

the river’s rust
upon the lust

the touch
the faith
the ritual

afar beyond
the feel of clay
the daze

cinder coil
silent blaze

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-10-22 12:57 PM

I like this, and it's rhyming scheme.. it flows nicely.

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-10-22 04:32 AM

thx

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-10-22 06:42 AM

yea,
this took me there
wherever that may be

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

4 posted 2003-10-22 09:16 PM

This definitly needs a bump, it's fantastic

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2003-10-23 12:32 PM

thx all of you

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-10-23 05:09 AM

pretty cool, short and sweet

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