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0 posted 2003-10-21 02:25 PM



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I know that sometimes I try to keep things
causing unhappiness   worries   and the fear
all wrapped up inside of me     of myself
Not wanting others to see the frowns
the bitterness     the  human side of me    of myself

So......
I try not to talk about those things
that bother me      keeping a smile on my face
when in reality
there are tears inside     down deep

Yet.....
You  KNOW  me so well that
you see way down inside of me     my inner being
where I keep the tears      the feelings
of unhappiness     worries    and the fear
below the smiles

As you know.....
I can hide from most people     all the time
and some people     some of the time
making them think that I am always happy   smiling
hiding the tears down inside     deep

But.....
My sweet Love      you   KNOW  me
I am so glad of that
and that you  STILL  love me.....



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-22-2003 09:45 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-21 02:26 PM


Beautiful writing from your heart Ethel.  Hugs.
El_Campeador
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2 posted 2003-10-21 02:35 PM


This is lovely, Ethel...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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3 posted 2003-10-21 02:41 PM


Thank you, Donna. I really
appreciate that.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-10-21 03:13 PM


Thank you, Ben. I'm glad
that you liked it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-10-21 03:32 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry because I also suffered as a boy and though I am optimistic on life now, I do have tears too and all I want is to make a girl feel special and love her and listen to her and feel her tears when she needs to share them! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you and Gary are two doves in a crystal nest, yay, may you always sing with loves tears, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-10-21 03:55 PM


how true
to be accepted for what we are
rather than for what we pretend to be
a rare experiance
arthur

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7 posted 2003-10-21 04:26 PM


Noah, I know that I tell you this a lot,
but you really do know what to say in your
replies. I thnk you for every one of the times
that you have said the right thing to me and Gary.
We both appreciate you, Noah....and thank you.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel and Gary

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8 posted 2003-10-21 04:28 PM


Thank you Arthur. Yes, it is rare.
I'm very blessed to have my Love.
Hugs  
Ethel

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