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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-19 09:49 PM




Come away with me to paradise
Where the water is always blue
Beneath the light of the tropics
On an island just for two

Time has little meaning
As we lay beneath the palms
And as the sun sets on the water
I start to melt into your arms

The day is put to rest
As the seabirds grace the skies
All alone here in our paradise
I am lost within your eyes

The stars have all come out
How brilliantly they shine
Everything in life is perfect
As our two hearts now align

* * *

"To love and be loved
is to feel the sun from both sides"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2003-10-19 10:03 PM


Beautiful picture to go with beautiful words!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-10-20 01:03 AM


Nice....James
arthur
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
3 posted 2003-10-21 04:07 PM


ok i have my bag packed and i am set to go
just where is our island
??
arthur

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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2003-10-21 04:10 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, if I was on a computer that could get the links of pictures to add to my comments, I'd give a huge tropical one here, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is just gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, and may you always rest in a hammock of love and sun forever, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2003-10-21 04:12 PM


Suetang,
That's about as nice as it gets. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-10-21 04:40 PM


Lovely lovely Sue!
It can't get much more romantic than this!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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