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Season's Loss
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Season's Loss |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Through the forest of feeling I walk alone {and the emptiness surrounds me} in silence. I pray waiting for leaves to fall like yesterdays dreams.. {dreams of then} Lost in seasons blowing by slowly ever changing constant..... without fail creeping into sorrowed souls {leaving the damp behind} like moisture trapped under fallen foliage eternally..... fading with time~ {as does my heart.} It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-21-2003 10:28 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Umm. Get the image of fall, slowly fading into grays. Strange, how seasons encompass our moods. Now you've got me anxious to see the crystal rainbows in a fresh snowfall. I really enjoyed this one, Donna. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is beautifully bittersweet. Thank you, Donna, for sharing this. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Donna, when I was a little boy, autumn always made me sad because of the dying flowers and leaves, and I felt buried in the ashes! (sigh) I know this feeling ever so well and hope it no longer applies to you, I send heart hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh such a melancholy write dear poetess. Very well written and I love the presentation. Be well..be happy. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all, and have a great day! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
D~ this is so soft and beautifuly melancholy. One of my favs of yours for sure.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
hey you, good to see you here! Thanks so much hon, appreciate it! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Melancholy, but well done.  |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
yea... I know about the season... I know about loss. You said it well ...very well. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"constant..... without fail creeping into sorrowed souls {leaving the damp behind} like moisture trapped under fallen foliage eternally..... fading with time~ {as does my heart.}" Donna~This is the first thing I have read this morning and frankly, I could stop here and be completely satisfied! I loved this and I think I will keep it. Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed the writing of the season...seasons are like friends coming to visit...here for a short while and before you know it gone again...thanks for the words.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sigh~   this is so touching.....even in sadness....hugsssss Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how sad  I love the sad ones |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a pretty reflection of your wide talents, and boundless gentle spirit. TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful again my friend... jwesley |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Time is so limited for me right now, but I do appreciate the comments and thank you all so very much. Hugs. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww Donna, oh sigh~ I am right there beside you. Your pen flows so tenderly. Hugs to you for this~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea, the fall fades to quickly and the snow makes thing so sharp and clear... Thanks. EC, thank you and I wanted to say I enjoy your signature line. Noah, you are a doll. Thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Nancy I am glad you enjoyed! Hugs. SE, hugs you! Capt, thanks much. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sey GG, it's good that seasons come and go. Some go much to quickly though! thank you. Susie, WOW! I feel so honored, hugs and thanks! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
GR, I am reminded of an old saying Here today, gone tomorrow. Thanks. L~ even when you sigh its so darn soft and beautiful! Hugs.. Vandana, glad you enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Dixie, don't be sad gal, SMILE! hugs TD, I am touched by your words. Hugs. Jimmy, my forever friend, I thank you!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori dear girl, thank YOU for being there, your friendship comforts me much. Hugs sweet lady! |
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