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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2003-11-04 11:10 AM



Drowning In Sea Salt


when we dance
you sing breath
and something else
takes over me
a wave in
an ocean of air
that bends whispers
and touch brings
hours to moments
as I drown
in you

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-11-04 11:28 AM


OneSlick~
LOVE it !!!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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2 posted 2003-11-04 12:46 PM


kinda happens like that *big smile*
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3 posted 2003-11-04 01:59 PM


cool poem
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4 posted 2003-11-04 04:49 PM


"and touch brings
hours to moments"

reaching . . .

nice lines

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5 posted 2003-11-05 04:29 AM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you always be soaked in the mineral waters of love and bliss forever! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-11-06 09:52 AM


Beautiful Helen.

Eric

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7 posted 2003-11-06 10:33 AM


nice
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8 posted 2003-11-06 10:59 AM


deliciously woven poem.
Sandra

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