Open Poetry #29 |
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Drowning In Sea Salt |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Drowning In Sea Salt when we dance you sing breath and something else takes over me a wave in an ocean of air that bends whispers and touch brings hours to moments as I drown in you "Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ LOVE it !!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda happens like that *big smile* |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
cool poem |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"and touch brings hours to moments" reaching . . . nice lines e |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may you always be soaked in the mineral waters of love and bliss forever! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful Helen. Eric |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice ![]() |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
deliciously woven poem. Sandra |
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