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Rainbowdust
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0 posted 2003-10-21 09:19 AM


Swap lives with me, Amber,
Please say you will?
Let me be you, and you can be me..

You'll know what it feels like
to come home to something as wonderful as you,
And I'll know the simplicity
of wanting only to sleep in your lap
or lie next to you while you watch tv.

You'll see how adorable you look
when you wake up, or wash your face,
And when you're sad, and depressed,
I'll accidentally turn my ear inside out
And humiliate myself just to hear you laugh.

Swap lives with me Amber,
then maybe you'll know how much I love you,
And what a huge place you have in my heart...
Cos you're just a kitten,
And I'm just a human
And I don't know how else to make you understand.

____

Since I haven't worked out how to post pictures yet,
http://shireen.zeocities.com/Lean%20on%20Me.JPG

there's a link to a pic of Amber if you want to see the most gorgeous kitten in the world!


The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2003-10-21 09:23 AM



Oh, she understands.  She feels it
in your touch.

Lovely!

Eternal Fantasy
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2 posted 2003-10-21 09:43 AM


Hehehe, that's a sweet little poem!  Well done.
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3 posted 2003-10-21 09:46 AM


Sweet -- and she does know!

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Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2003-10-21 10:48 AM


I am a kitty lover as well!!

Wonderful piece of writing!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

KoKo
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5 posted 2003-10-21 10:52 AM


Ooooh this was so sweet!!!
And your kitten is adorable !!

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6 posted 2003-10-21 10:55 AM


Oh, this is soooooo precious!

to you and for Amber!

Earth Angel

Martie
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7 posted 2003-10-22 10:43 AM


Precious!
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2003-10-22 10:50 AM


very nice! enjoyed.
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9 posted 2003-10-22 11:20 AM


Hi I couldn't get the piccy to open, but I know they are all precious, aren't they!!! I love kitties, too! It's funny I am reading this now. My youngest son and his girl asked us to kitten-sit for 2 days and he's a pure delight. Plays all the time and is as quiet as a mouse during the night! Sheesh..they have the best of both worlds with this little one!!!! He's pure sunshine!
Love,
Terri~

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10 posted 2003-10-22 03:36 PM


I couldn't see the picture, either... but did enjoy the poem very much. *S* She's a very lucky, much loved kitty... bet she knows it! *S*
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11 posted 2003-10-22 03:38 PM


How adorable...very much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

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