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A Woman Flows {duet with Sunshine}
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A Woman Flows {duet with Sunshine} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Softly~ so softly putting into words what is felt in the heart baring a soul totally vulnerable to the feelings unleashed in pen.... A woman knows many hungers one of the soul of the child of a man of a light, which she continues to strive for, a warmth, for which she is always in search of, a desire, beating to death within. All that is held inside flowing thoughts, once upon a time only residing in mind pouring out in sweet release.... feeding from the knowledge, the flooding of soul that comes from the journey of there, to this moment held so tenderly.... A woman will be many things but mostly, misunderstood. In her searches she will seek understanding and she will find, herself. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-21-2003 11:33 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bravo!!! Excellent meshing of talents!!! Wonderful.. Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You lovely poetesses speak for all women and have done so with the utmost grace and beauty.   & Linda A Woman |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A woman will be many things but mostly, misunderstood. In her searches she will seek understanding and she will find, herself." =========================================== And how true is this??!! Bravo...you two duet so beautifully together. ~Smiles & Hugs to you both~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what better two to write such a passionate tribute to women all over the world? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so very much. Writing with Karilea is a wonderful treat for anyone who has that pleasure. When you toss her a written line she knows just where to take it to make it pure bliss.... Kari, lady...  and thanks so much for this very special duet. Hugs. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A woman knows many hungers one of the soul of the child of a man OH you two flow so well together. Love that, and this too... A woman will be many things but mostly, misunderstood. It's a woman thing all right, and I am so glad to be on the same page with both of you. So special this is!!!! Thanks for understanding.  Hugs~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
So very, very beautiful, this is, you two. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs to you both Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit & Karilea~ Nice job, ladies~ Very pleasurable read~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Donna, coming to know you has been a pleasure over these last few years. Dueting with you, is like Christmas in July. When poets share their words, they can only expand their universe. Thank you. And thanks to all who are kind enough to read, and leave a comment. Your thoughts and impressions are deeply important to any poet. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Misunderstood?...that's an understatement!!.....Yep, they do understand hunger and cravings....and, my stomach's growling for you as I type....So?..Ya wanna be lunch?....Um, er, I mean ya wanna go to lunch? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Toe, so good to see you here and so pleased to wear this smile for you! Hugs! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I believe the grace of a woman is truly extraordinary and magical and though it saddens me to see many miss how special a woman is, their beauty is meant to be misunderstood! (big group angel hug) Yay, I love this, sweet friends, you are phenominal women, naturally, phenominal women, that's both of you, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Donna and Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Misunderstood? This is just the beginning, and only through time and mutual giving, will she ever be understood....if only he will listen... Excellent write ladies, seems you both did extremely well here... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent work both of you, greatly enjoyed. Maree |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I am astounded by your work! This one is a keeper, no doubt about it! Now here it is! I wish I wrote this, but alas, I am not at this level...I, however, am capable of the feelings and emotions behind these words, and that, I assure you both was captured in this piece. Hugs to you both for this. Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I need to reply to all of you! And I'm short on time. Suffice to say, I will get notes off to you all individually. Thank you for enjoying this duet with us! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The moth is late as always, far too short on poetry time these days...but I wanted to say how lovely and gracefully your words laced together. Well done ladies! "I've still got sand in my shoes |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I do like this. *S* Excellent work, ladies... you blend perfectly. *S* |
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