Open Poetry #29 |
Shallow Light To End |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Here, in early afternoon The shadows still cling Tight against walls and tree, Not yet in yawning stretch Of evening and far before The wrap of nights blanket On all that now Reflects the light in diamond tipped points of sun. This time seems so easy To laze about in thoughts of you Remembering perhaps Early morning dew on leaves As they danced outside our window In daybreaks breeze And I Was wrapped in the sigh of you That kept me warm Early times Breathed in a rise and fall That was excited by the brush of skin Bare walled begins And the smell of love’s original sin Soon enough, The moon will rise And the wane of seasons Remind me again “Winter has no friend.” For now, I’ll ignore the shadow's limbs Dreaming “Would your lips meet mine so tender? Or would your shaded eyes Pretend?” [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (09-23-2003 04:15 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You would just beam that light on any pretender and the truth will out. I know! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely penned,,
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This time seems so easy To laze about in thoughts of you Remembering perhaps Early morning dew on leaves As they danced outside our window In daybreaks breeze And I Was wrapped in the sigh of you That kept me warm I suspect no pretense would be possible... not after this. *S* This is beautiful, Cap'n! *S* |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This time seems so easy To laze about in thoughts of you Remembering perhaps Early morning dew on leaves As they danced outside our window In daybreaks breeze And I Was wrapped in the sigh of you That kept me warm Why oh why do I love the verse that makes me so sad!! Outstanding, as usual, you~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I choose the same stanza as Blues as my favourite... Achingly beautiful Ron. This is one huge sigh waitin' to happen. ~Hugs~
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
these words flow like liquid. you must SWEAT poetry or something. And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Sweat Poetry" LOL...isn't that the truth.. Your muse is the god of muses Pssst...Ron...it was the intake manifold gasket this time...gotta blame GM...grrrrr..cha ching Susan |
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