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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Together we swim in an immortal dream called life A pathway dissolving on our tongue shines The meal is equiseta and sent from heaven Sleep close within the feasts of union Behind earth’s shadows, rotating stones keep their secrets We step into the air holding lovers With eyes toward the future and soundless images Driven by fluorescence alphabet precious Enlarging our souls, beyond all meaning Where an ocean of bookstores wait patiently Greasing our palms with gold, youth and summertime We have cleared customs, to seclusion and Candlestick Park Where mirrors listen to the wind Waltzing to the tune, while we tenderly smile & imagine Listening to the peaceful sound of rain on the roof Faces gleaming like the light of a morning sun Not at all certain that this was the perfect conclusion Or the beginning of some remarkable account Inhuman? And duty bound, with a vague sense of anxiety Now, I Find nature more beautiful then ever And have understood more vitality unmeasured There is a perfect execution where mind has no thought An Eros of spiritual companionship, more spiritual then life itself Baptized, in the knowledge of something extremely powerful Where I recognize all the calm of the universe Within you, the very center of our being Where that one moment arrives, electrically charged with the Face of God |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"There is a perfect execution where mind has no thought An Eros of spiritual companionship, more spiritual then life itself Baptized, in the knowledge of something extremely powerful Where I recognize all the calm of the universe Within you, the very center of our being Where that one moment arrives, electrically charged with the Face of God" Lee, this is absolutely beautiful writing.. You brought it to the most perfect closure. Have a blessed day! ~Morning Smiles, Nancy Lee~
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ This is a bon bon I have no trouble swallowing. Enjoyed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"We have cleared customs, to seclusion and Candlestick Park Where mirrors listen to the wind Waltzing to the tune, while we tenderly smile & imagine Listening to the peaceful sound of rain on the roof Faces gleaming like the light of a morning sun Not at all certain that this was the perfect conclusion Or the beginning of some remarkable account Inhuman?" Ugh, you take my breath away.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Now, I Find nature more beautiful then ever And have understood more vitality unmeasured There is a perfect execution where mind has no thought An Eros of spiritual companionship, more spiritual then life itself Baptized, in the knowledge of something extremely powerful Where I recognize all the calm of the universe ah..the pearl of wisdom and understanding that comes from living and seeking... nicely done... I enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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