Open Poetry #29 |
denying me... |
Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
do you miss me? when you stare into her eyes... do you taste me? when you're lying in her arms... do you hunger for me? when you begin to hate her do you linger when you think of me? when you grow tired of her... do you find yourself denying me? when you're caught up in your thoughts do you find yourself tripping over my fragance... when you're kissing her....? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Many questions that I know we've all asked ourselves after a love is gone.Let me knnow if you find the answers. Crystal |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Very good! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kristen~ This is really GOOD~ You will stir the memories of many with this penning~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
I'm soooo saving this!!!!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I don't want to go back there! Egads those times really hurt. ~ But those feelings have passed! --and now I couldn't care less! Time is indeed a great healer! Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nice write! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
unless he's an idiot.. pro'ly |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow... The raw wound of your words. Oh, I'm back. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Kris! Oh gawd, another of your best....ooooh this ooozes something, i dunno, but i want some! into my library. ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God in Heaven Kris reading my mind from afar . . . I think about this all the time grrrrr . . . yes I do and you know? I often wonder if they do? Ok this one hurted xxoo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Kristen, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I surely feel that feelings of loss seem to reciprocate with other relations! (big hugggsssssss) I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
good questions....often don't get answers. joy has its own justice. and dreams are languid and lawless. and everything bows to beauty, when it's fierce and when it's flawless... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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