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In The Wind Weep
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In The Wind Weep |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In The Wind Weep ~*Marge Tindal*~  I hear tears in the wind weep across a broken heart they sweep bending laurels of the bough melancholy refrain ... of long gone now~ Wind weep circles on a shroud of gray blowing me about in complete disarray I felt them coming but did not heed the warning of this heart in need~ Running from shadows of yesterdays' pain I slip and cannot my footing regain Wind weep sweeps me against my will in tears of shed ... ever still~ In the wind weep I find you gone I know not where ... but, oh too long No one to shelter me from the seep of the thrashing, smashing wind in weep~ I cower beneath the earthen sheets alone ... alone in the wind weep~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge~ This touches...in places deep... Understanding Hugs,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Enjoyed this. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis....Melancholy beauty.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful write, my friend... I'm sorry some listens bring you weep. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Love your turnabout language...and this poem all the way through. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Your talent amazes me. I find myself in awe of you Each time I read you on these pages of blue Your words paint such beauty thru and thru These words of praise I send to you Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge I like.  |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
i enjoy the way you set this forth.. kind of like words wearing a tank top.. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really love this one. Love ya, Betty |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I'm sorry that anything brings you tears, but you've shown it true here. Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Deepest appreciation to each of you for letting me know you found a touching moment in this piece~ Sometimes the wind weep wears us down, etching tearful memories deeply into the crevices of our soul~ But, we try to wear the smiles of yesterday and hold the memories dear~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
again, I have to smile at your knowing and tell you, this touches.....and that picture is amazing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I got all tingly reading this. It was as if the wind was weeping through my spirit... Huggums, Linda |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge, you always have so much to satisfy my senses as I read...words, great images...what a pleasure it is!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You have channeled through me so many, many times~ You and I are of the knowing~  EarthyOne~ Thank you for letting it touch you~ SunnyOne~ What a gifting to see you here~ Appreciating the gentle of your reply~ *Huglets* all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge Your words were so very moving, yet so very beautiful. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This, Marge, is an excellent piece of poetry...just haunting. Remember, gone is not gone...forever is not forever.... And no separation can overcome the soul's own seeking for that which will -- inevitably -- complete it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Not sure how I missed this, must have been that computer gremlin, but darn glad I found it! This touched my heart and soul and I could feel it way down deep. Sometimes we just have to bury the tears and sorrow under a smile but it is so important to acknowledge that the pain is there! May the wind wash over us every now and then. Hugs for a special gem ... Marti |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
sad poem. But without pain, joy would not be nearly as easily recognized. Nice write! "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
You know Marge, a gentle wind really can have that sound and feel of a woman wistfully sighing... Softly blowing against your neck... Revealing all the secrets, she never could before... It really can be a stirring feel... Just like this poem... Richy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
been missing your words, my friend... thanks sudhir |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Just incredible. Such a sense of mystery and mourning! A wonderful poem and the graphic is perfect! So glad I got to read this! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
~~~~sigh~~~~ I know the feelings of this. I am otherwise speechless here. Loved this. It spoke to me and I found the response: The Wind Changes (((HUGS))) Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was absolutely touching....how beautiful were your words, so bittersweet and filled with love. The picture is awesome...images filled with hope and trust. Thank you so very much for sharing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Belated appreciation to so many of you ... and now for SEA~ ... I feel the Wind Weep once more~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
I needed this Wind to Keep. David |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
just beautiful marge, I too have lost my shelter and am cowering behind my silence these days....needless to say, every word of this touches deep |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how'd I miss this?  |
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