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Sanctuaries Shawl
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Sanctuaries Shawl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sanctuaries Shawl Sanctuaries shawl of lace A rose and a sprawl of space Sitting in a timeless jar A flower shining from afar Memories of lighted wicks Melted wax of candlesticks Shadows dancing on a stain Dancing on a former reign Covered with a blankets blind Subject to a state of mind Sleeping in a well of wish Sweet as honey from a dish Fed upon in times of need Sprouting seeds of former deed Glories of a timeless cast Brought to shore in mimes of past A widow’s walk along the shore Nothing less and nothing more |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What images...thank you for the walk, Sy.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy! As beautifully written as always! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
What a beautiful read first to start my day off. Really enjoyed it. ~Angie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Sy! How could I ever start my day without you?! Wonderful morning read! Off to take Autumnal pictures today... You have a good one! And....tea is ready...I'll pour.  ~Sunday Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine I loved having you.  Susan, Thank you my dear. IrishDreamer Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the lovely comment. Nancy, Thank you sweet and a for the tea. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A lovely A.M. stroll indeed. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such tranquility, this walk. Taken by many and walked again in memories...wonderful memories... Thank You Sy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Patricia, Thank you for the read and reply. Barry, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Covered with a blankets blind Subject to a state of mind Sleeping in a well of wish Sweet as honey from a dish wow Sy, incredibly written, makes me ponder, where in the world would we be in our lives without all these times and emotions. Beautifully written....thank you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are sweeter than sweet this morning. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful metaphors Sy. A real deep but meaningful write... Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Much enjoyed the quiet images... You have such a nice way of bringing your words to life. "Nothing less and nothing more" That really did it for me. Good Sunday morning to you Sy~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, A kind comment, thank you my friend. BluesSerenade A lovely reply, thank you. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Morning, Seymour I enjoyed our walk, too. Thanks for taking us along.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thanks for the read, hugs back. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sy, thank you for this.This heightened my senses, revived my soul, and made me smile. Crystal |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sanctuaries shawl of lace A rose and a sprawl of space ~*~ Memories of lighted wicks Melted wax of candlesticks ~*~ Shadows dancing on a stain Dancing on a former reign ~*~ ======================== Im smiling at you cross the miles for those delightful couplets of clever word play and rhymes...each needs to be read as their own entity for their imagery and insight. Shadows dancing on a stain youre so cool. Sorry I missed you yesterday...its hectic here...a moths work is never done.   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal, If it did all that, I am pleased. Jm, I never had anyone understand me so well. WWRS |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the world is our sanctuary and the beaches go on for miles so let's run with the sterlings! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
beautiful poem! Much enjoyed read. JD "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, You have the right idea. allamericanjoe Glad you enjoyed and thank you. vandana, Thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I read that first beautiful couplet and knew I was in for a treat. *S* This is excellent, my friend. *S* |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Seymour, Every line is a gem. Thank for the lovely poem. No question about it, it is beautiful and a delight to read aloud. SG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you sweet, glad you liked. SimplyGold Thank you for the wonderful reply. |
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