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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-18 10:39 AM

You are mine
Imperfection in its most
Exquisite form
No need for the flicker-dance
of the candle light
Nor the roses
You brought home tonight.

No need for the aftershave you use
Or the way you've done your hair

All for me.

Still, it's nice.

But nothing can compare
To the way you hold my hand
Or the way you look at me.

The world could flood, burn,
Fall away from its axis
Spinning off into eternity
And I'd never know
As long as your eyes hold mine.

IrishDreamer
Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 55
Kansas

1 posted 2003-10-18 10:51 AM

This is what we all desire to be accepted imperfections and all and love is what makes that happen. Thanks I really loved this one.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-10-18 10:57 AM

Sweet...just beautiful all the way through.

And this:

"Imperfection in its most
Exquisite form"

Just gotta love it -- and wish I'd thought of it!

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SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

3 posted 2003-10-18 11:03 AM

Beautiful. Seeing love even with the imperfections. What a lovely heart you have!

and

for you and your love to share. Lovely, lovely heart.
Love,
Terri~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-18 11:09 AM

KoKo

Love in spite of imperfections, even because of..wonderful and heartwarming to read!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-10-18 11:18 AM

Now, this belongs
to lovers.

Well done, KoKo!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-10-18 12:36 PM

Simply beautiful!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2003-10-18 01:10 PM

Oh WOW!! Much enjoyed this lovely!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2003-10-19 06:36 PM

But nothing can compare
To the way you hold my hand
Or the way you look at me.

The world could flood, burn,
Fall away from its axis
Spinning off into eternity
And I'd never know
As long as your eyes hold mine.

So very, very lovely... and you're right... nothing can compare. *S*

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

9 posted 2003-10-19 06:57 PM

You echo my thoughts! Lovely write this one.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

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