Open Poetry #29 |
Princess Blade |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Princess Blade (True Love Never Dies) No one knew this better than I. When Princess Blade drew her sword someone was about to die. When it came to things of her sword none would survive with stories to tell. For her sword was known to silence evil men and send them straight to hell. Live by the sword, die by the sword. Words a wise man once took the time to share. And I knew that one day Princess Blade would pass away and leave behind those that cared. Sad to see it happen before my very eyes. A fatal blow to her heart finished her off. In remorse, I kissed the Princess Blade goodbye. Though she's gone I dearly miss her and I cry. This I leave with you, "true love never dies." JamesLee September19 2003 |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write n read,,,
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for the advice!--I'll put my sword away! Seriously speaking, this was a bit of a departure from your usual style, and it too, was a very interesting read. And yes, if the love is true, I do believe that it never dies. EA |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
James enjoyed this read! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh and that it doesnt James, truth spoken beautiful writing xxoo |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
What a odd little poem! Methinks you've been cheating -- those comics lose value if you read 'em too much, gotta save 'em for resale when they're nice and rare.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
This is an awwwww.........poem. I enjoyed very much. Thanks for sharing. Bon-Bon |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully said, James. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this truly brought tears to my eyes as I believe this with all my heart and know you are destined to find true love forever as you share a common creed with Princess Blade and only wish for love to prosper, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you QJQ, Earth Angel, Roniece, littlewing, Ratleader, Bonnie, Viraynes and Noah for the nice responses... Actually Ratleader I wrote this and another I haven't posted yet after watching the movie of this title...James |
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