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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-10-15 02:00 PM

I can still remember the words
when you spoke them
soft whispers
to my heart
that landed deeply
within my soul,

You said I was
~Unforgettable…~

Melancholy memories indeed…

And now, I alone
here in my silence
think back,
reflecting upon
....those whispers
and wondering
if they ever were true

or were they just
merely words
whispered by you….

And I believed in my heart then
~as I do now~
I just wish that you
would here my heart whispering
…somehow….

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-15-2003 02:02 PM).]

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Martie

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1 posted 2003-10-15 02:05 PM

Hi Donna...Bittersweet and beautiful!

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-15 02:22 PM

Ah Donna...this piece just aches....
Hauntingly beautiful lady....just lovely.
~Soft smiles & warm hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-10-15 03:03 PM

Sometimes, I just want my signature line
to say it all.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

4 posted 2003-10-20 02:24 PM

hugs all, and thanks....

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2003-10-20 09:47 PM

SweetSpiritOfGentle~
This is lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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6 posted 2003-10-20 10:09 PM

Yes Donna, very beautiful, with a strong
taste of a yearn to know.

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Member Rara Avis

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7 posted 2003-10-20 10:19 PM

love you girl....hugssss
you have such a touching heart...
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

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