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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-15 09:28 AM

Once Upon A Twenty...or less

Felt it before it rang,
reaching across the ball of fur warming me
sitting up trying to find my way.

Dream feedback I call it,
morning whispers slipping away
but trapping me into a new day.

Déjà Vu one time too many,
as I try to hold onto the thoughts
knowing they'll disappear into the chill.

I walk the headstones searching,
never finding, for death did part us
and I buried more than memories.

You, my one and only,
all I needed, no substuitute would do
these strings, so attached to you, unbeknownst.

Fragments surround me, chips of hope,
morsel-feeding me daily, maybe through him,
carving my resolve "to never be".

And you, You are watching over,
seeing me still, as that little girl,
walking along the beach holding my hand.

M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-15-2003 09:42 AM).]

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2003-10-15 10:50 AM

This is so sad and beautiful at the same time. Wow! It toucked me. Thanks nakdthoughts.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-17 09:46 AM

just missing my Dad and his strength *s

thanks EV2

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-10-20 10:41 AM

WynterDearWynter~
I felt the missing~
Sending *hugs* ... hoping they help just a little~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-10-20 10:46 AM

Fragments surround me, chips of hope,
morsel-feeding me daily, maybe through him,
carving my resolve "to never be".

And you, You are watching over,
seeing me still, as that little girl,
walking along the beach holding my hand.

Maureen, this has such longing
and missing in it.
Here's a hug

Ethel

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-10-20 10:50 AM

Well I lost my father too soon...and my sister in her shortened future and I guess after visiting with a funeral director for my Mother..I was feeling the memories of a walk on the beach with my dad as a child...that secure feeling one has that you wish could last forever.

Thank you Marge and Ethel.
Sometimes you just long for an understanding friend to lean on.

M

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2003-10-20 11:20 AM

I know what it is like to long for Daddy strength..

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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