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Open Poetry #29

A Labyrinthine Life

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-10-20 09:40 AM

i let myself fall
everyday finding something,
finding someone who makes me less
i become what i hate
losing myself in the shambles of the day

i lie alongside of the debacle of society
discovering myself amidst all that is depraved and perverse

i live and die by status sway
judging sufficiency by ancharical dismay
i crave the esteem i once exalted
desire sanity, desire pride
all that cunning minds have seized

'let me not to the marriage of true minds'
displace the undertows which search me out
emancipate me from the labyrinth
draw me from the storm
take me back to the place i belong

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-10-20 11:04 AM

draw me from the storm
take me back to the place i belong'''

OH wow, this was so very powerful! Enjoyed much....

Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-10-20 11:16 AM

Ku~

I am enjoying your writings very much!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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