Krista - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #29

Krista

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

0 posted 2003-10-14 02:26 PM

When I think of you, I don't know what to say
I've never met someone that makes me feel this way
Sometimes I wish I had met you before I met her
You are the only one that makes my heart stir
Why is it that you came into my life?
Perhaps maybe to be my partner, my wife
I do think that we rushed things though when we first met
I've never wanted anyone as much as I want you
Forever I will lay in your arms.......forever I will be true

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2003-10-14 02:34 PM

Very sweet...filled with need and want. This is whatr makes life truly onderful. The depth of emotion that we can feel. Loved this piece.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

ParisGrl
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

2 posted 2003-10-14 05:58 PM

Evocative,

Thank you for your reply. I'm glad you loved the piece.

~Laura~

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.