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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-13 04:06 AM

So few nights will end
on a good note, with me.

I went to bed angry.

The ashes left
to scatter themselves on the floor.
A cyclone of my heaving lung,
I couldn't care less
if the pain is unbearable..
I still like to focus
on my inability to breathe.
In an hour's time I'd called you
and let you listen to me weep.

All throughout the night,
I wait for you.
I dreamt that perhaps, by chance,
there would become a
ghostly message of my humming
'cross the land that seperates.

So much for love, such a tedious
subject to pen.
And such an obsolete requiem, I
still wait for the ink
to fade .. in disgust
by my heart and it's infernal wrapping,
tapping,
ticking and tocking..

The day wasn't meant to end this way,
with my insanity drawing on my blood.
My yearning, creeping like a
menacing vine.

As if I couldn't feel this
painful progression as you
played up and down the strings..

With your obscure comfort,
the crackling lines of your voice..
An intoxicating moan of mention..

That I..
am of more importance than
I give myself credit for.

Tonight,
I failed to realize..
That sleep is not neccesary,
untill I've seen
the sunrise.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-10-13 04:09 AM

That I..
am of more importance than
I give myself credit for.

very good lines, they expressed the read well,,,

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2003-10-13 04:09 AM

"So much for love, such a tedious
subject to pen.
And such an obsolete requiem, I
still wait for the ink
to fade .. in disgust"

meg, meg, meg..you know, that i know that, you know...h

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

3 posted 2003-10-13 04:15 AM

this guy was right, you are of more importance than you think...

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

4 posted 2003-10-13 04:18 AM

this guy was right, you are of more importance than you think...

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2003-10-13 04:19 AM

sry this drinks make me forget that i already clicked once on the reply. sry

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2003-10-13 12:46 PM

so beautifully written

but then I've come to expect that when I click on something with your name

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-10-13 01:35 PM

I could quote lines or try (unsuccesfully) to tell you every emotion these words pulled..but i'll just leave it at..you're amazing. You already know what i think of you and your words..hugs meglet

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2003-10-13 01:39 PM

This one is good... Thank you, Meghan.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

9 posted 2003-10-13 04:42 PM

ditto with Raph..staying safe...you make me feel so childish..your words are just amazing

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

10 posted 2003-10-13 07:24 PM

Wow...This is exactly the kind of night I had last night. Can't believe someone else was able to put it so perfectly into words.
This was really beautiful. I love your style of writing.

Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me.
So call me Captain Backfire.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-10-14 04:59 PM

I like the title of this poem

nice

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-10-14 05:02 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Meghan, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I believe we always must rest on some ember pillow, for sleeping is rejuvenating and without recognizing the light only leaves us in deeper fatigue the next day! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

13 posted 2003-10-14 06:16 PM

"'cross the land that seperates"

much angst, more truth...you do dark beautifully.

Rf

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2003-10-14 06:21 PM

You have a stunning talent....in awe of these words....

Lauren~

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