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Unfinished Thoughts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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~Unfinished Thoughts~ Swinging to thoughts, of a swirling mind the skies so blue...the eyes' soft find. I rocked to music, mood-to-deep suspended time, in bliss thoughts keep. The sunset swirls, in rose-pink-blue brought evening's peace, my moment's you. Remembering those oft' chance meets the trails of hold, the kisses sweet. I whisper now, words sent through breeze of wish-dream-wants in time to seize. Unfinished thoughts...some day to tend... and so I leave them...this night in end... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-13-2003 08:15 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely penned thoughts,,, |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
beautiful. all u people make me want to fall in love. the list needs revising!! Meg Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Unfinished and open... How wonderful your gentle spirit. TD |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
smooth flowing poem well done Gloom |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi nakdthoughts. You thought this one would get away from me! Nope I found it! Loved it too. This is something I wish I'd written. Well done! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Awsome write. I absoulutely love this one! Very well written and expressed! "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very soft. One would hope for a peaceful sleep. Like your picture. "Nils Desperandum" Wells Family Motto |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
well written, finished thought! Rf |
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