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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2003-10-13 07:26 AM

stuck between
as they say
a rock and a hard place
yesterday and today

while I sit
on this park bench
past memories
sling their whiplashes

flinging salt on open wounds
like sea waves
lashing on bruises
left behind by
crimson layered sunsets
almost
insultingly

never knew
something so beautiful
can hurt
this bad

never thought
that the breeze would
try to fault
the rustling
of leaves
and the flight of
butterflies

but then
life is full of
decision trees

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-10-13 07:53 AM

Very intent write, full of awareness and the beauty of life, even in the not so nice times.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-10-13 08:24 AM

Good morning Sudhir! Wonderfully descriptive phrases within this piece. You've set the mood beautifully ... well done my friend!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-13 08:36 AM

Sudhir,
I can only add to the others. Well done my friend.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-13 08:45 AM

yes..life is full of decision trees...

hope all is well with you my friend...

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2003-10-13 08:55 AM

I can always count on something truly insightful from you, my friend...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2003-10-13 10:15 AM

enjoyed

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2003-10-13 01:42 PM

This one quickly jumped its way into my library and my heart...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-10-13 01:54 PM

...decision trees...

I like this very much, Suddy...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

9 posted 2003-10-13 05:04 PM

Sudhir, my friend...such a fresh idea, a "decision tree". Loved the poem!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-10-13 06:19 PM

Love it!! Good to read you again m'friend.
I see your location has changed...
but it hasn't affected your fantastic writing.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-10-13 10:42 PM

yes life is filled with just that and more and less

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

12 posted 2003-10-14 05:08 AM

Thank you all so very much...

My regards to all,
Sudhir

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2003-10-14 05:11 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Yes indeed, and they too have much foliage always so the possibilities remain endless! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is whimsically serene, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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