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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Within Within the dark my candle burns Dwindles small with all its yeans Lighting but a bit of space But in that light I see your face. It is a face of phantoms dwell That shines from out my wishing well A face that haunts my spirits sight A face within a halo’s light A ghost that flowers in my dream A grace that fills my every seem A nautilus that sails the blue A magic mote of crystal dew Within the dark its credit lies Within the dark its spirit flies Within a veil it stays the day To sway the night in awesome play I dare not catch this apparition For fear it will destroy Emission |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
within your write, I see splendid and bright poetry... regards, sudhir |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
within us all lives those generous critiques, unseen but very much alive and there. You my dear poet, are a magician. Good Morning kind Sir, and how was your weekend. Hopefully very colorful, warm and all inspiring. Thank you Sy and good to see those all to marvelous creative juces flowing  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend Lee, Thank you sweet, I'm beginning to feel like old faithful. LOL And the mear fact that I'm here makes my weekend wonderful. You are a sweet thing and I thank you for your kind replies.  [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (10-13-2003 09:33 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, that candle that burns within you is more than enough to light up the entire universe! Oh how I loved this mornings verse. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
The fact that you're here makes our weekend pretty wonderful too, Sweet Sy - Thanks for another good'n...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love the fact that you are within this poem, Sy. Good Monday to you, Sir. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, It's not the tea that gives me sight But he answers of your write.  Nan, And I too. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Good Morning Sy!! Wonderful writing..Thank you sir! Susan |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Susan, Thank you my dear. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A face that haunts my spirits sight A face within a halo's light A ghost that flowers in my dream A grace that fills my every seem A nautilus that sails the blue A magic mote of crystal dew Within the dark its credit lies Within the dark its spirit flies ================================= Could those couplets be any cooler? any more clever or poetically delightful? A nautilus that sails the blue A magic mote of crystal dew my oh my do I love that one!! And I had to smile at your reply on here about feeling like Old Faithful....but Ole F spouts steam and smoke...(like Randy)*L* You spout poetry...daily rhymes divine... but yep--youre a natural and national treasure alright.   *ww* "Nature's first green is gold, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I think old faithful's audiance is falling off. LOL WEll one does get tired of spouting off. LOL But you my dear are ever there And that my dear is all I care. WWRS vandana Thank you so much. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Great write! I loved it all, especially Within the dark its credit lies I dare not catch this apparition For fear it will destroy Emission You've got a pretty cool pen! Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite Thank you for the lovely comment. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I truly hope you know just how much your poetry is enjoyed by so many~ I STILL read you out loud ... sooooo lilting you are~ Have you done tapes or live readings of your stuff ? You should~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, T-Man! May you spout like this forevermore...   EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you love. Marge, You are a sweetheart. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Someone call EMS, I think I am having a coronary.....I believe I found a spelling mistake in HIS poem............Could that possibly be? Aside from a slip, always your classic style that greets our day. Thank you Sir Sy..... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Enjoyed your reply, thanks for the read |
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