Think of Me (Tanka poem) - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #29

Think of Me (Tanka poem)

Tais3
New Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 7
Canada

0 posted 2003-10-14 02:35 PM

Through paths of Nature
in the midst of deep forests
you are far away
fishing on mirrored blue lake
winds whisper thoughts of our love

http://pub88.ezboard.com/bacryforpeace

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-10-14 02:38 PM

I like the quiet beauty in this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

2 posted 2003-10-14 02:41 PM

Very serene, I like nature poems, though I'm not much good at them. I'll have to work on that! Great write, fun read.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-10-14 03:27 PM

Serene is the perfect word yes.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-14 05:04 PM

(sigh) Oh Tais, this is absolutely refreshing, sweet friend, makes me feel like walking to Chautauqua Park and seeing the still waters! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tais, thank you for sharing!