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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-10-14 03:17 PM

I read the line.
Thin typed it was honed
To an edge that cut the casual nod of passerby
Who thought only to touch the surface
And pay respects perhaps
                                 Without knowing  the why
Of a placement there
   Or a sound to echo this
                                     The sound of breath on stone
Unfeeling as it is
                                     Alone

I would not bleed you here
                  With wit
For I am not keen
                 In thought

But
              There is that line
In single spaced sharpness that we have read from time
To
       Time

Too  time

               Two times
Or more

And ended on these pages
                         Bled

Our own lines stained
                                         instead

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-14-2003 03:25 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-10-14 03:19 PM

I demand you two duet again..nuff said

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2003-10-14 03:22 PM

WOW....

I insist that I must second Raph...

'nuff said

regards
sudhir

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-10-14 03:24 PM

lol.. raph... you would have to convince the lady... my door is always open for another duet with her.. her talent far surpasses mine and it becomes a pleasure to see how she molds words and phrases into something more than the sum of the content they hold in meaning....
Sudhir... my friend... it would be my pleasure..

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-14-2003 03:27 PM).]

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-10-14 03:30 PM

It appears that graceful writing begot graceful writing...

EA

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2003-10-14 03:35 PM

no one, absolutely no one writes like you do my friend, how you do with words what you do, I only wish I knew...sigh... wonderful work

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-14 03:58 PM

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

7 posted 2003-10-14 04:22 PM

wowwwwwwww...
this is good.
How do you do this?
I wish I could.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

8 posted 2003-10-14 04:26 PM

oh absolutely rofg@sunshine...but...lol...gotta join her

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-10-14 04:31 PM

(smiles) The rain truly can add to so much like an iridescent paintbrush, sweet friend, I just love those connotations! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I too would love to see another duet, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2003-10-14 04:36 PM

What words spoken by Rain''

gentle in your grace....WOW

SIGH~ it shows! it does, ask anyone....

Lauren~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2003-10-14 04:54 PM

nice

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2003-10-14 06:26 PM

I am never ever disappointed in what you write and post..
In fact..I am totally blown away...awe-struck!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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