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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-10-12 03:31 PM

Two thirds of life is bluest from the far sight
Lipid pools in landscaped cups of half-light
Waters rise and churn in endless vast, come nearer
Power to be chaste, embraced by those kept dearer

Saline depths as tears washed into clear across the miles
Warming with the trends of balmy autumn nights beguiles
Purely drizzled streams from mountain peaks accenting waves
Rising in the inner throws of flows spent hot in tidal craves

Two thirds of me remarks this striking composition
Emotional displays within the sways, dynamic disposition
Where waters ever motion somehow in a mix and mellow
Clearer deeper down and still, the spill of blue with yellow

Sleepless in the yearn to sink in harbor at the core
Waiting here until the time has come to wash ashore
Deeper in the center where most miracles would brew
Fullest in the places where spring fed in thoughts of you

Copyright Kkh 10/12/03

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-12 04:41 PM

You let loose the gems
of the sea, Kathleen...

this is absolutely beautiful...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-10-12 05:16 PM

There is something unique about you, that
always shows within your poetry and your love
of the oceans and the seas...

Well done K.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-10-12 06:21 PM

TD...your images are exquisite, the rhyme and flow just perfect. I have been wanting to attempt rhyme and meter again...but I have been so busy with work and home. Maybe this week...it seems you and Magnus are inspriring me to get going again.

Great work!

Patricia

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-12 06:24 PM

ThisDiamond
A delight to read, enjoyed.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-10-12 09:42 PM

a terrific enjoyment to read,,,,

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2003-10-12 10:11 PM

TD...As always you amaze me with your artistry!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-10-12 10:23 PM

i never feel too far from an oceanview either,
very beatuiful words

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