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Break-up |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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You’re a tease, and I’m willing to beg... Do not leave in the middle of foreplay! I will follow you, stretching my neck through the guillotine of the doorway. See my gaze, full of woe and regret? -- Do not ask, "What’s the matter?" To forget how to love you is to forget how to love altogether! Check out my poetry here: |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Andrey--- Ages since I've read from you, what a shame, what a shame. I shared a chuckle with Carly (Child of the Stars) over MSN that "Master just wrote a poem called Break-Up." Kind of an unusual subject matter for you, based on what I remember about your writing. You pull it off, though. I like your witty tone in this, even though it's obvious you leave it on the note of some kind of lesson learned. Somehow I still get the idea this poem is meant to be less-than-serious. Condolences if this is based on a true story. Parasite Faith is a fine invention |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Hey hey LP, it's been too long! It's nice to know you're still around... I pop in once in a while to post some new stuff, but not that often. No, this one wasn't based on a true story. For some reason or other, most of my recent poetry has been rather sad and depressing... I guess I just got tired of happy poetry. haha.. And yea, I did intend this one to be a little less-than-serious, as you put it. It seems to me, like half of the time, lovers are merely playing games, making empty threats just to stir up some emotion. I wanted to capture that aspect of relationships. Thanks for reading, Andrey Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (10-11-2003 10:49 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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