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Untill The Rain Stops
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Untill The Rain Stops |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
The clouds came by The birds flew away As the sun comes Sun and I Watching the rain It's been a quite time you haven't said a word About tomorrow you have cried all day I tried to hold you But you didn't let me You didn't want to smile Because you know I will be gone by tomorrow Untill the rain stops You want to say But I guess Your sorrow and pain shows In your eyes You are trying not to cry But your emotions shows The darks clouds rolls by Amnd yet It is raining My heart Is paining When you are not saying a word You know It Is all over between us I will be gone by tomorrow Untill the rain stops |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Empathy is one of the highest human traits -- and you have an extra portion. I love this poem, and I find that I'm starting to look forward to all your work. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetVanDana~ This is beautifully sad, it's as though the rain is crying your tears~ Sending  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Vandana, this is sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I wish for it to rain pearls and crystals for you, with tears of love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vandana, lots of emotions expressed...You are continuing to grow and doing nicely... Good Job. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, this is very pretty, even if it is sad. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs Ethel |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressed well,,, enjoyed,,, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The finality is not easy to accept, and I loved how you compared it to the rain. Nothing lasts forever, including the heartache. Nice writing vandana~ |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Nice! I like. Thank you for sharing it with us. "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exsquisite in the ache... Wonderfully written piece. Hugs Vandana. TD |
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