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Open Poetry #29

Dusty Roads

Masked Intruder

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since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

0 posted 2003-09-23 03:05 PM

I've fallen on dusty roads,
drying my already dry eyes.
The scrapes will scar
in sad crescents
and jagged wishes;
I will fumble and falter
weakly to my knees,
straining to find something,
someone, to quench my parched heart.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-09-23 03:16 PM

an interesting visual.. and the imagery of crescent scars reminds me of a few of my own...

nicely done, sir...

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-09-23 04:04 PM

thoughts expressed well,,,

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-09-23 04:42 PM

Hi Hi..
well...here is a hell from one stranger to another.

Lovely pain and determination here.

I miss you..this place...my own writing...

Dear John,
IF YOU'RE TIRED OF PRETENDING..
THEN WHY DID YOU GO BACK INTO HIDING?

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