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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-10-09 10:46 PM

Waterfalls Immortal

If wishes were like waterfalls
Emanating from once still
The molten core to brakeless calls
In streams of endless fill

Then here begins as rippling drops
Upon a silent pool
But building smooth tides never stops
The waters rise to rule

In rapids with their white capped crest
Exploring frenzied play
Until the edges round the rest
With glee in gentle spray

And endless rivers sated well
Of promise strong take hold
To fount in silver blooms soft swell
And bathe majestic bold

The overflow of granite walls
In endless now-untils
Brought to the breadth as ever falls
An ever cup it spills

Copyright Kkh 10/09/03

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-10-09 11:33 PM

enjoyed your write n read,,,

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2003-10-10 12:59 PM

Hi Kathleen!
I hope all is well?

I’ve sure missed how your words softly ripple over the shallows,
only to come cascading down and into our imagination...

It’s so nice to see you again!

Richy

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-10-10 01:01 AM

This is great,Your words are always so smooth and flow with the gentlest of ease.

Crystal

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-10-11 05:42 PM

I love the falls, the white waters...but I
simply, without question.....HATE cold water!

BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR......

Beautiful write Kiddo....ya dun gud....

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-10-11 05:48 PM

Very pretty the way it just rolls through your mind like a gentle softly sang song. Very nice.

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-11 06:35 PM

(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, waterfalls truly are immortal and cannot be dammed therefore, as they have a will all of their own! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-10-11 06:35 PM

Kathleen, this is so beautiful. I was going
to highlight a favorite verse, but couldn't
choose. They all are my favorite.

Hugs

Ethel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-11 06:40 PM

enjoyed this

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-10-11 07:05 PM

Thank you everyone. So good to have PIP back up and running. Have had some things to attend to, thus too little time to read everyone as I would like. I will visit each of you soon.
TD

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

10 posted 2003-10-11 11:26 PM

TD, I believe I've mentioned this before; but it's about time that you've released your own book!

Always a pleasure.

~Tier

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