Open Poetry #29 |
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Time Trance, Warrior's Prance |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA ![]() |
Time fluttered on silver wings, soaring among the memories of seasons as dreams sifted the lids. Let the stir bring forth the storm of weathers churning.Let the grey rain the dusted plain of sandstone peaks and ridges high above the shadow’s trace. For, as hope calls in echoed bray of the lathered mule, so shall destiny shine the clearing skies of shining nights among the clothes of a moon’s dance. As the warrior cries above the dunes, so shall the owl in hunter’s trance above the dead eyes of the quivering mouse. |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
wow. heavy.it is really awesome though. the images u use are vivid to a point of reality. Liking this very much. Meg Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A very powerful write, Barry. Whether or not your intent of this piece, your words left me with a sense of strength...an "uplift" much needed today. Thanks! Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...You wrote a powerful moondance, my friend! |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
oh..now the mysticism as well as the romantic... I saw more here than perhaps you intend...but saw an old tale again, told me by a friend.. and one that to this day I carry as a reminder of all that was is still, if only in the spirit... nicely done my friend.. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
powerful indeed |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Barry, this is wonderful, sweet friend, now you're delving more into Native American mythology, you are so very versatile and have the soul of an owl! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this drums with intensity, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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