Lord Nocturnus and the Gryphons

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Open Poetry #29

Lord Nocturnus and the Gryphons

RunningWolf
Junior Member

since 2003-09-14

Posts 24
Michigan USA

0 posted 2003-10-09 05:27 PM

to the highlands we will go
weilding swords as
our sheilds luster in the midday's sun.
its off to battle the paegans
we fear no mortal enemy.
i am lean, mean and filled
with aggression.
this battle will be quick
or my name isnt Nocturnus
chasing wraiths and paegans
i hunt by night but
together we Gryphons
stand ten thousand strong
and move like lightning
as we sweep over the plains
storming villages and
making route to the highlands.
fear is the badge of a fool
this shining cross is the badge
of the brave and wise ones.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-10-09 05:29 PM

I only hope that you will bypass the English Midlands on your way to the Highlands, ok? Wow, this was a great read, with a touch of the mythical...loved every word! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

2 posted 2003-10-09 06:44 PM

wow. cool. very D&D. (dungeons and dragons for all u non-geeks out there unlike myself)i like the feeling and motivation put into this piece.

Meg

Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2003-10-09 08:33 PM

Cool RunningWolf
Love it.

:-)

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

4 posted 2003-10-09 09:33 PM

not every day you read one like this...awesome

We do away with your kind...I am war I am pain I am all you've ever slein I am tears in your eyes I am truth I am lies. Dimmu Borgir

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-10 01:34 AM

Don't forget to eat your Wheaties.
LOL, enjoyed the roust.

RunningWolf
Junior Member

since 2003-09-14

Posts 24
Michigan USA

6 posted 2003-10-23 05:11 PM

i wonder sometimes how my poems look in another persons eyes. makes me wonder sometimes if poetry is worth my time.
thundering horses will forever run through my mind.
thanks for the comments. hope those who didnt reply enjoyed this and others as well.

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