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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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In one day You will know (or won't) if what you have seen does indeed.......exist In one day You will see (or not) that I am merely human a base animal.......man In one day You will hear (perhaps) the fears that I carry within my voice.....hidden In one day You will realize (I hope) that standing before you is all that I am Tomorrow You will feel (I trust) the love that I bear translated to flesh.....at last [This message has been edited by wranx (10-21-2003 01:51 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
absolutely stunning writing Ed, and I know she will love this...very well done! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
One day or five maybe three hundred will not sway what I know to be truth One day or seven even one thousand cannot hide this smile alive within my eyes One day or twenty possibly one million will not steal this beat not unlike your very own One day . . . yes . . . We both shall see the world through another's eyes only to realize we were looking through our very own in the first place  Have a safe trip, Baby I Love You, Eddie Susie xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-21-2003 02:05 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Had to smile at this Ed. Had a day much like it but I think I did a 72 hour countdown...lol. Almost lost my nerve at the last minute and didn't go. But it turned out to be a great day. Will be thinking about both of you. Relax. Have a good time. Easy for me to say huh?  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Really? Oh wow!! THIS is SO exciting... You two finally get to meet!?? Tell me 'yes' that's what's happening okay? Oooh what feelings you two must be going through! Best of luck..keep us posted. ~Smiles & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I enjoy your work (almost as much as my own!) arthur |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
don't worry ed...everything will be wonderful...helen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now isn't THIS just the greatest thing I've read this day !!! Best wishes to you both~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
wranx, Well that's plain enough. Lots of luck. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now we're getting to the good part.  What a special time it will be, I wish you both a whole lotta love! Your poem is true to form wranx, brought a tear and a smile to my eyes! I am so happy for you two, truly. It just doesn't get any better than this. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Well, you both know I have a HUGE smile plastered on my face now... I am so excited for you two...but then, you already knew that too...grin Be safe, Ed, and I know you two will have a wonderful time...finally together... Love you both...  When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-21-2003 05:08 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am just a smiling away here, don't forget I need that trip to N'Arlins to see  now will you two? She told me all is well so quit your shaking in your boots ya big Yeti, and enjoy! This was in the cards  Sue, big huge hugs all around, wish I was a fly on that wall! Hey and he even cooks |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is absolutely wonderful news, all the best to you both. Will be thinking about you. Have a safe trip Ed.  to you both Maree fate is not just |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I know I'm not welcome in your fold, but I had to speak on this one. WOW! Stunning! Amazing. Loved this!!!! Terri~  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is always wonderful to finally meet in real...  M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh My you guys are so so sweet . . . Terri - of course you silly we are ALL family here . . . Sharon LMAOO . . . YES (ok not like right away or anything) all of you have made me smile so you see Ed? *smile* xxoo |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...most wonderful to see this happening within your words....I know it will be magic and yes, human. Hugs to you both! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This must go to my library. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tomorrow turns into today...worry turns into happiness...h |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
You have to call me. This was amazingly beautiful. I can't express how happy I am for you. |
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PouringJewels Member
since 2003-09-18
Posts 158Maryland |
Ed, I spent way too long with my last writing. You will have to pull it up, because I don't get read as much due to noone knows me. Luv U |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How beautiful... both poem and reply... I wish you both such happiness... and many, many tomorrows!! *S* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Today Happiness to you both. This is good to see! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Meant to be. I seem to recall somebody telling ya'll that...  delighted hugs and kisses. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Smiling HUGE for you two today... Love and hugs to you both... And, Karen?...I'd say that was a pretty smart 'somebody' who told them that... When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-22-2003 05:50 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hmm . . I seem to remember that too one word: HOME Much Love Sue & Ed [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-23-2003 11:35 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...another classic |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Smile ! the truth is worth to wait for it shows the way we have to go. sometimes it tell to force the feels and move on. Jes |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Nicely written, Wranx! It's difficult - wondering what the perception of us is by others and the reality. Not to worry, your words and deeds will tell her. Corinne |
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