Open Poetry #29 |
Riding the Dictionary |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Riding the Dictionary once there was a river of words but the current changed leaving reluctance edgy on the banks why is it I feel I have to defend them I own them and the rapids that runs free in the feelings that defines them damn maybe it is all just a tide in a pooled vocabulary misunderstood "wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some good imagery going on in this here reflection pool... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I knew I would love this from the title, and yep...I do love it.....great word use, and imagery |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you never let us down... Well done Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
ah...now this is another keeper for my library! Hey, if you keep this up, I'm going to have to get an extra library!!!! Great job here...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
I love it! Not much more I can say... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes it does get down to that, doesn't it....and we choose our words without truly knowing what they mean, to the person we're talking to. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sometimes when certain words get caught up on a branch or in an eddy that can be a good thing... Sometimes not... All we can do is use the ones that are flowing through our mind at the time we are trying to convey our truest feelings... Where that river goes from there, and how it’s used, is pretty much out of our control at that point... I hope that your words never stop cascading into the stream Helen. Without them, it just wouldn’t be the thriving life force, and source of inspiration that you so help to make it, everyday... Richy |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Your poetry truly is like a edifying Atheian healing spring, sweet friend, it truly does cleanse and fuel us with compassion and knowledge to so many emotions! (big hugggssssssss) It is always a pleasure to read you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
brilliant |
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