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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Out-lined outside you you had drawn a line stopped dead evidence that there had once been living within a circle now just walls thick of salt meant to melt when touched by the travel of snail silk don’t worry it is such a crime but I won’t cross it |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Sad, but well done. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
understood this in, maybe not the way you meant it, but my own way. Very personal and very real. Thank you. |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
beautiful title, and the poem, too |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Sometimes I read a poem and wish I didn't understand it. This is one of them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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alisa Member
since 2003-08-20
Posts 70Florida |
i am speechless. last night i felt this had a different meaning, today i feel another meaning. thats what i love about your work... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's sort of like spiting themselves... I like your style M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Such heart and soul fills this, sweet friend, I hope all is well and you sure embroidered this in frame, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing red |
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