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Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-10-09 10:52 AM

You needn't worry
nor be confused
I would not
be the one
to confess
if I were
to misconstrude
I was borne
an actress
therefore
I know how
to mask
the pain
I even know how
to put on
a pretty smile
just for display
when I can
taste your aura
a thousand miles away
Truly
you needn't worry
I have many ways
to hide
the bruises
that cover my heart
So relax
I would never tell you
anyways
If I were to
fall
only because
I respect
what we have...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-09 10:59 AM

So much in this...so many layers...
some of them, so very very thin...

well done, Kristen

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-10-09 11:39 AM

This hits close to home, I really enjoyed this.

Jason

iwontdrownagain
Junior Member

since 2003-10-04

Posts 39
Massachusetts

3 posted 2003-10-09 12:03 PM

Your poem was great. I understand what you mean. It hits close to home with me as well. I hate having to hide things from people, but I do. Maybe it's just me, but I hate doing that. Sometimes it's the only way to keep privacy and avoid talking to people.
Well done. Keep it up!
~Lynn

"The green of your eyes
That you get from your father
Shows your personality,
Such a young girl with an equally
Young and foolish heart."
~Lynn M

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-10-09 12:06 PM

Good girl!!! This speaks volumes to me!
Once an actress, always an actress~
(or in my case, a drama queen)

Loved this Ceinwyn!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2003-10-09 12:09 PM

yes..some of the layers are rather thin..and one step..one might indeed fall...

you write this well.. and here is to hoping if you do fall, that you fall into the right arms.

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

6 posted 2003-10-09 12:27 PM

Wow. I know exactly what you're saying. Very well expressed and real. Thank you.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

7 posted 2003-10-09 12:59 PM

better is open rebuke than hidden love

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

8 posted 2003-10-09 01:53 PM

Sometimes, people holding different goals for the future can tear a friendship apart -- things can get "weird." It's happened in the past, and I'm sure it will happen in the future. I hope he/she/it will be able to hold onto your friendship, that you will be able to hold onto his/her/its friendship, without things gettin' messy.

Always enjoy yr poetry.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-10-09 02:27 PM

Kris, I truly hope that whoever this is concerning
reads this. This really touched me, because I know
how it feels to keep things inside.....I did it for years.
I guess the only reason I don't with Gary is because
he knows me so well that he can tell when something's
bothering me, and tenderly and lovingly gets me to
talk about whatever it may be. By the way, I don't know
if you've noticed in some of my writings, but Gary
and I started out as only friends...then best friends.....
and still are best friends even after we have "fell"
so madly in love. So, Sweetie, it is possible.

Hugs and good luck,

Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-09-2003 02:29 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

10 posted 2003-10-10 08:53 AM

eek Chris..you are such a great poet. I love how you say you were born an actress. that sounds just like you

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2003-10-10 11:51 AM

what a wonderful write

falling can be beautiful, even when the landing is rough

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

12 posted 2003-10-10 12:56 PM

I have to agree the actress or drama queen is sometimes easier to do.
Crystal

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

13 posted 2003-10-10 10:30 PM

(big hugggssssssss) It is sometimes necessary to play this leading role, but also make sure you don't keep in character long after the performance, for holding the ache inside only hurts you more, believe me! (sad sigh) Loosen up after the melodrama comes to a closure, sweet friend, God Bless You, I send angel comfort hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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