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Your song
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Your song |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
As you would know by now my vice is not this shot I slam like ice a moments breath will hold the tale a man who drowned in fairytales my one true vice as many know is loving things when God said no so punish me for I was wrong or so said God I heard your song I heard your song... [This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (10-09-2003 12:24 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I've drowned in faerie tales too...*sigh* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah.. Jason...to love what is not to be, and to drown in what could be..I think I understand..maybe too well. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
a moments breath will hold the tale a man who drowned in fairytales I've heard that song before~ Yes, it's a vice that's hard to shake! Could be worse, then again it could be alot of things. Wonderful writing Jason~ |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
yes, very familiar, drowning in fairytales. im still drowning in fact, or am i? |
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Gina Culliney Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 170 |
A well penned piece, deserving of praise. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I know this you write it well |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
my one true vice as many know is loving things when God said no and why do you think that is? if he said yes, youd be bored too fast probably , right? |
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